Let's conclude

Ø  How to Write a Better Conclusion?

 

1.      Summary of the main ideas

What do we mean by the summary of the main ideas? Simple as it is, the summary refers to the restatement of the thesis; that is to say, write it in different words. That is the most efficient method to begin your concluding paragraph. Try and avoid repetition, use appropriate and context-related synonyms, examples or even descriptions if you have to. As you know, repetition may sound boring or lacking creativity. However, it is not wrong to repeat key words or expressions that are too important to be substituted. It is better to risk repetition rather than risking misunderstanding of your reader. Here are some examples of thesis statements and summary statements:

Activity: Take a shot at it! Look at the first example and try and write your own summary of the second.

Thesis Statement: Many people are buying Volvo because of its price, fuel economy, and high resale value.

Summary Statement: Reasonable pricing, low fuel consumption and an attractive resale value have all contributed to the popularity of Volvo in today’s market.

Thesis Statement: Italy is a stimulating place to visit because of its magnificent location, theatres and art galleries, and many fine restaurants.

Summary Statement: If you love beautiful surroundings, theatre and art, and an excellent meal, then Italy is the best place for you.

 

2.      Final Thoughts

In this part, you may write your comments on the subjects of your essay. This is the place to express your opinion, make a judgement or give a recommendation. However, do not add any new ideas in the conclusion because it is the end of the essay.

Activity: let’s do the same thing! Look at the first example and try and write your own final thought of the second thesis.

Thesis Statement: Many people are buying Volvo because of its price, fuel economy and high resale value.

Final Thoughts: Because of these features, Volvo is the type of car many people prefer to have. We will have to wait and see to what extent the popularity of Volvo will increase in the near future.

Thesis Statement: Italy is a stimulating place to visit because of its magnificent location, theatres and art galleries, and many fine restaurants.

Final thought: Perhaps it’s because I am of Italian ethnicity, still Italy is my favourite country to visit. I don’t really understand the language much, but it is “bellisimo!”

3- A teasing statement or a provoking question? Keep them on their toes! (Optional)

It is optional to pose a provocative question in the concluding paragraph, but you must summarize the key ideas raised in the body paragraphs and include a closing statement. A question like the one in the introduction draws the reader in and attracts his/her attention. The question should touch on a point you raised in the essay.

Thesis Statement: Many people are buying Volvo because of its price, fuel economy, and high resale value.

Question: Wouldn’t it be great for you to have one?

Thesis Statement: Italy is a stimulating place to visit because of its magnificent location, theatres and art galleries, many fine restaurants.

Question: Why don’t you go and take a one-way ticket to Italy now?

 

So, a concluding paragraph should look like this:

In conclusion, reasonable pricing, low fuel consumption and an attractive resale value have all contributed to the popularity of Volvo in today’s market. Because of these features, Volvo is the type of car many people prefer to have. We will have to wait and see to what extent the popularity of Volvo will increase in the near future. Wouldn’t it be great for you to have one ?

 

In summary, if you love beautiful surroundings, theater and art, and an excellent meal, then Italy is the best place for you. Perhaps, it’s because I am of Italian ethnicity but Italy is my favorite country to visit. I don’t really understand the language much, but it is “bellisimo”. Why don’t you go and take a one-way ticket to Italy now?